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Sunday 21 June 2015

Don't keep it to yourself, make sure you tell someone!

Image result for Someone in hospital cartoonSpending time in the hospital!
On the 7th of June, my brothers Folau, Taniela and I were sleeping over at my nana's house on the weekend. My brother Taniela woke up and texted my mum because he couldn't breathe but my mum was fast asleep at that time, so he decided to text my auntie Phoebe and tell her that he was having trouble breathing and his stomach was sore around 6 am.


My auntie Phoebe saw the text and quickly told my mum. My mum got up from her warm bed and got the asthma pump and came over to my nana's house straight away.  My nana never knew about my brother being in pain. Taniela opened up the door for my mum. My mum settled Taniela down and my nana said, "Are you coming to pick him up for church?" my mum said, "No, he texted Phoebe and said that he was in pain." my nana was shocked that Taniela didn't tell her anything.

Once my mum gave my brother the asthma inhaler, they headed back to my house so they can pick up some pills to relieve that pain. However, even after taking it the pills he was still in a lot of pain. So my auntie, baby brother went with my mum and my brother to Starship hospital. 8 hours later, my family and I went to drop off some clothes, tooth brush and food for my mum and Taniela because they were going to be at the hospital for a while. We waited for the nurse to come back with my brother's blood test result to make sure that he hasn't contracted any disease or have an infection.

A while later, we got the permission slip that said that he is fine enough to go home with us.

I felt happy because he hasn't  caught a flu or any other disease because it was just a cold. I think he would try hard not to catch a cold and keep himself warm.

WALT understand and use descriptive language.
I know this when I use verbs and adverbs to describe things and people in my recount.

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